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murdock » 9 minutes ago » wrote: ↑

9 minutes ago

It had all the punctuation I thought it needed.

I know prose.
There is easy to read and quick cognition type writing and the harder to grasp type.
Punctuation can make all the difference in the world.
Leaving a flat string of words sometimes forces the reader to work a split second longer.
I wanted your context to leap out at me.